statement of intent feedback redraft

  

4

Link to brief: 2

Use of media terminology (language/representation/theory): 2

Comments for AQA:

  • This statement makes some attempt by including what this magazine will feature and how for example the types of camera shots and angle and what the cover lines and double page spread will consist of
  • The candidate does attempt to include relevant media terminology such as enigma codes and target audience types

Next steps:

  • Your statement feels incomplete and lacking enough depth and detail for example what is the name of your magazine?
  • Remember that you only need to comment on the celebrity influencer you are choosing to represent. The other cover lines can be about actually people in the media – link these people to the target audience of C2DE
  • Consider other media theories you can mention e.g. Todorov, Propp, Blumler and Katz

statement of intent

my magazine cover will be a celebrity gossip magazine called "Spill The Tea" and will include influencer (Qumars) a celebrity known for he crypto trading as he's made millions he is now published a positive mental health book as before his fame he suffered from depression but in recent years has over came this I choose a male as my influencer to subvert stereotype that men don't have feeling or emotions my influencer will be the protagonist (Propp's) of the magazine overall making the magazine more inviting to males I will use many different camera shots such as medium close up, close up, and medium shot i use these to show the characters outfit and their emotion also the camera angles with give power or weakness to the character  also through my selling lines I will add (enigma code) curiosity for example " beckham scandal "this will make the magazine more interested for readers to buy also my character will be a young adult showing the young people have emotions to overall my magazine  is for all people to read but mainly my target audience is the C2DE audience this means people who do practical jobs like building driving or cleaning It also includes those with low pay or no job allowing them a insight on celebrities life also the front of my magazine cover will be the disequilibrium (Todorov) as multiple things are happening like cheating and celebrities scandal also my cover lines will includes the influencers qumars so the C2DE members to have an idea on how the rich life the life  

my double page spread will be the new equilibrium (Todorov) it will be a interview on the Qumars where he is asked questions about his personal life and the reasons for he writing the book i will include 4 images of the influencer in a sitting position to give the interview sense about also make it information feel more confidential the first page will be about his personal life and his upbringing this builds personal relationship (Blumler and Katz ) between Qumars and his audience the second page will be about his reason for writing this book and how it has effected him and how has he over came it this would give the audience a sense of personal identity (Blumler and Katz ) as the audience would want to become like him and over come the problems 


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