statement of intent feedback redraft

  

4

Link to brief: 2

Use of media terminology (language/representation/theory): 2

Comments for AQA:

  • This statement makes some attempt by including what this magazine will feature and how for example the types of camera shots and angle and what the cover lines and double page spread will consist of
  • The candidate does attempt to include relevant media terminology such as enigma codes and target audience types

Next steps:

  • Your statement feels incomplete and lacking enough depth and detail for example what is the name of your magazine?
  • Remember that you only need to comment on the celebrity influencer you are choosing to represent. The other cover lines can be about actually people in the media – link these people to the target audience of C2DE
  • Consider other media theories you can mention e.g. Todorov, Propp, Blumler and Katz

statement of intent

my magazine cover will be a celebrity gossip magazine called "Spill The Tea" and will include three different characters the first will be a famous basketballer (Kacper) 26 year old Polish sports celebrity who has switched teams for a unknown contract possibly worth millions my second character will be a celebrity (Anh) 24 year old Vietnamese female who is know for her makeup company and collabs with large brands such as boots but was later was caught cheating on her husband of 3 years and my last character with the influencer (Qumars) a celebrity known for he crypto trading as hes made millions he is now published a positive mental health book as before his fame he suffered from depression but in recent years has over came this I choose different genders to subvert stereotypes also the female character will be the antagonist (Propp's) this is not traditional as females are rarely never presented as antagonists this subverts stereotype and makes it more interesting then the basketball player will be the hero's helper (Propp's) and finally my influencer will be the protagonist (Propp's) overall making the magazine more inviting to all I will use many different camera shots such as medium close up, close up, and medium shot i use these to show the characters outfit and their emotion also the camera angles with give power or weakness to the character  also through my selling lines I will add (enigma code) curiosity for example "want to find out what happened next buy the magazine "this will make the magazine more encouraging for readers to buy also my character will be different ethnics showing the cast is diverse and is for all people to read but mainly my target audience is the C2DE audience this means people who do practical jobs like building driving or cleaning It also includes those with low pay or no job allowing them a insight on celebrities life also the front of my magazine cover will be the disequilibrium (Todorov) as multiple things are happening like cheating and team switching also my cover lines will includes the influencers Kacper Anh Qumars Mr beast and Robert Downey Jr as it will allow C2DE members to have an idea on how the rich life the life  

my double page spread will be the new equilibrium (Todorov) it will be a interview on the Qumars where he is asked questions about his personal life and the reasons for he writing the book i will include 4 images of the influencer in a sitting position to give the interview sense about also make it information feel more confidential the first page will be about his personal life and his upbringing this builds personal relationship (Blumler and Katz ) between Qumars and his audience the second page will be about his reason for writing this book and how it has effected him and how has he over came it this would give the audience a sense of personal identity (Blumler and Katz ) as the audience would want to become like him and over come the problems 


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