statement of intent feedback redraft

  

4

Link to brief: 2

Use of media terminology (language/representation/theory): 2

Comments for AQA:

  • This statement makes some attempt by including what this magazine will feature and how for example the types of camera shots and angle and what the cover lines and double page spread will consist of
  • The candidate does attempt to include relevant media terminology such as enigma codes and target audience types

Next steps:

  • Your statement feels incomplete and lacking enough depth and detail for example what is the name of your magazine?
  • Remember that you only need to comment on the celebrity influencer you are choosing to represent. The other cover lines can be about actually people in the media – link these people to the target audience of C2DE
  • Consider other media theories you can mention e.g. Todorov, Propp, Blumler and Katz

statement of intent

my magazine cover will be a celebrity gossip magazine and will include three different characters the first will be a famous basketballer who has switched teams my second character will be a celebrity who was caught cheating on her husband and my last character with the influencer of a positive mental health book i use different genders to subvert stereotypes also the female character will be the antagonist (Propp's) the basketball player will be the heros helper (Propp's) and finally my influencer will be the protagonist (Propp's) and make the magazine more inviting to all  I will use many different camera shots such as medium close up, close up, and medium shot i use these to show the characters outfit and their emotion also the camera angles with give power or weakness to the character  also through my cover lines I will add enigma code for example "want to find out what happened next buy the magazine "this will make the magazine more encouraging for readers to buy also my character will be different ethnics showing the cast is diverse and is for all people to read but mainly my target audience is the C2DE audience this means people who do practical jobs like building driving or cleaning It also includes those with low pay or no job 

for my double page spread it will be a interview on the influencer where he is asked questions about his personal life and the reasons for he writing the book i will include 4 images of the influencer in a sitting position to give the interview sense about also make it information feel more confidential


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